There are a few small continuity issues that I think could use a beta, but other than that, this is a really, truly amazing and stellar piece of writing.
I absolutely love Chris' characterization -- you fleshed him out so well; he was a joy to read. (And Dustin is pretty funny, I have to admit. XD) I also really love the way you built up the dynamic between Wardo and Mark (or Freshman!Mark, as it were, lol). There were so many funny moments and sweet moments. So well done, really. A pleasure to read! ♥
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There are a few small continuity issues that I think could use a beta, but other than that, this is a really, truly amazing and stellar piece of writing.
I absolutely love Chris' characterization -- you fleshed him out so well; he was a joy to read. (And Dustin is pretty funny, I have to admit. XD) I also really love the way you built up the dynamic between Wardo and Mark (or Freshman!Mark, as it were, lol). There were so many funny moments and sweet moments. So well done, really. A pleasure to read! ♥